jdjarvis
Level 4 Theurgist
Hmmm,,,, had two user names, I'll be using this one from now on.
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Post by jdjarvis on Jun 4, 2014 12:04:07 GMT -6
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Post by burningtorso on Jun 4, 2014 13:05:48 GMT -6
Even for a beginning it has great results!
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Post by cadriel on Jun 4, 2014 13:48:21 GMT -6
Nice. The descriptors of the tomes really fit well with the feel of the Carcosan rituals. And it reminds me that I was always impressed with the names of the Carcosan rituals, which are very evocative of a particular exotic evil.
On the execution it needs a little cleaning up, mostly the spacing of the phrases. For instance: It'd be better with spaces after the colon and the first comma, and none before the second comma or the period.
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jdjarvis
Level 4 Theurgist
Hmmm,,,, had two user names, I'll be using this one from now on.
Posts: 123
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Post by jdjarvis on Jun 5, 2014 6:53:07 GMT -6
Just expanded the output to describe the books a bit more. Formatting definitely needed some work, a lot of the spaces were in the rune names themselves, might have gotten them all cleaned up.
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